These are excerpts from essays written by teenagers as they were written and unedited...:
1 Tuesday last week was the worst day for Sheila .. when she opened her eyes she was wonder why alarm clock no sound.Anyway she was late for school.She rushed to the bathroom,saw cockroach and fell down.When she open eyes again,she fast go change clothes and rush to school.When she was there she then remember today is a holiday.She walked home because she take no money.As she walking big dog came from somewhere and chase her.She ran here there and same time motorcyclist crashed into her and the big dog.The ambulance came fast and take Sheila , dog,motor man in same bed to hospital..... sad day for her !
2.What is anger?Such as some people are hot chilly?When someone who is bad tempered disturbs you,that means you'll become angry and the bombs will happen...
3.Some people chase money on eating food.Before two years a chopstick woman may become huge African elephant....obesity happen..no good.
4...Many people is at home burning....Falling from stairs.Many children like take toys on floor stp fall head,paralysed on floor.We must of them go into coma.This one ends up in death.
5.Dude how are you doing?In the last letter you wrote to me that you are interested to come running to my country.....No deny..my country very big.........Dude I'm waiting for you.Do not think and think,just come,I promise you unforgettable tourism,dude.
6.What's lying ?It's action that every human does.You do not believe it,let me ask you this,how old are you?Most people will speak lie to answer.OK,even if you're most honest person in the world, you must have lie done time, if not you are no longer human.OK, enough lying.Why do people lie?Here we have our Asia special answer, some other countries are also learning it, that is we Asians hate to " lose face " in front of one another.................................Time to know what come after lying.Do not try this at home.What happens after lie to everybody?People that is lying may cost them their life,can lead to suicide.If you lied to your boss that you took the money, it may cost you a lot of stress and you end up in the coffin, that is the worst.
to be continued...
